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If required please rephrase the following sentence:

An interior designer and an architect by profession, both women, at Elements, strive to offer not only the best designs and the finest spacious cabinetry/drawers, but also attend to all your appliance needs
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Default Re: Kindly check the structure of sentence

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If required please rephrase the following sentence:

Both women, an interior designer and an architect, at Elements strive to not only offer the best design and the finest spacious cabinetry/drawers, but also attend to all your appliance needs.
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