
Originally Posted by
jomo27
Factually, people are on the move all the time.
I hope you came up with a different first sentence. In fact, we may finish the essay before we decide what the first sentence should be.

Originally Posted by
jomo27
Migration has an impact on the place that has been left behind by the migrant and also on the place that they are migrating to. These impacts can be both positive and negative.
Migration has an impact on the place the migrant left and also on the place the person moved to. This impact can be both positive and negative.
True, but isn't that rather obvious?

Originally Posted by
jomo27
Actually, not only humans are moving, animals too, and it’s called animal migration. But it’s not sounds common.
Not only humans migrate, but animals do too. It's called animal migration. And it's fairly common. (Notably: the caribou in North America and several bird species.)
That might be interesting, but I doubt that it is relevant to your essay. Did you keep it in or take it out?

Originally Posted by
jomo27
There are many reasons why people are moving, and some of the reasons are really common. For examples, natural disasters, better living conditions, job opportunities, poverty and war, and so on. In fact, there are quite a lot of strong reasons why they are leaving their country they live. Firstly, it can be of fearing of their lives because of religious or ethnic persecution.
People move to make a better life for themselves and their families. Sometimes they have no choice but to move.
Can you name one of the most significant migrations of the twentieth century?

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