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Diverse processes of hybridization have affected the festivity of the Lord of Miracles, originally a Limean festivity. First, the Peruvian internal immigration from Andes to Lima where Andean iconography contributes and expands its influence over diverse social groups. And second, through the external immigration where immigrants transport with them their customs and traditions that under the influence of the local culture also confront with processes of hybridization.
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A process of hybridization has affected the Lord of Miracles festival. Originally a Limean festival, its change is brought about by Peruvian migration to Lima, bringing with it the expansive influences of Andean iconography, and the powerful influence of foreign customs and traditions. These two factors combine to fuel the process of hybridization.

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