a few sentences about Parmesan cheese

[changeling]

Hi everybody!

Do I express myself correctly in the following sentences?

The production of Parmesan cheese has almost a thousand years long history. It requires milk of cows that are being bred in a small part of Italy including Parma, Reggio-Emilia, Modena, Mantova and Bologna regions. Cows can be fed only by grasses or fresh-dried hay of surrounding meadows. Wrong feeding can result in milk that doesn’t meet quality requirements. And in fact, this milk is absolutely free of any food additives.


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[Soup]

The production of Parmesan cheese has a history of almost a thousand years. It requires milk from cows bred in the Italian regions of Parma, Reggio-Emilia, Modena, Mantova and Bologna. Cows are grass-fed only or fed freshly dried hay from the surrounding meadows, and so the milk is absolutely free of food additives. An alternative diet produces milk that doesn't meet the requirements of quality standards.