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[popsie]

You work part-time in a museum. The museum director wants to attract more visitors and has asked you to write a report, making some recommendations.

Museum exhibitions

This report is intended to find some possibilities to increase a number of people who will go to the museum.

Findings

The entrance fees are quite expensive. The exhibition does not use computers or other information technologies. The museum has not created a presentation on the Internet.

Recommendations

• Decrease the entrance fees - especially for families and students

The entrance fees are quite expensive. Some families or students are not able to afford to buy a ticket.

• Interactive exhibition

The exhibition should be as lively as possible to captivate a lot of people.

• Virtual museum exhibition

Conclusion

In my opinion, is a big disadvantage lack of marketing activities with using modern information technologies. These days nearly every people have an access to the Internet and use it for finding out information.

[Anglika]

You work part-time in a museum. The museum director wants to attract more visitors and has asked you to write a report, making some recommendations.

Museum exhibitions

This report is intended to find some possibilities to increase a number of people who will go to the museum.

Findings

-The entrance fees [to the museum and to temporary exhibitions] are quite expensive.Some families or students are not able to afford to buy a ticket.

-The permanent exhibits do not use computers or other information technologies.
-The museum has not created a presentation on the Internet. There is no website for the museum on the Internet

Recommendations

• Reduce the entrance fees - especially for families and students

Offer discounts for groups and for families.
Offer reduced fees for students and for senior citizens.

• Interactive exhibits

The use of interactive technology is recommended. This adds interest for children in particular..

• Virtual museum exhibition

A fully informative website should be constructed, with glimpses of individual galleries to arouse interest. It should also contain information on temporary exhibitions.

Conclusion

In my opinion, a big disadvantage is the lack of marketing activities using modern information technologies. These days nearly everyone has access to the Internet and use it for finding out information.

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