Working conditions in the Indian garment industry

[swedishgirl82]

Hello everybody!
I'd like to ask if there is someone that could help me to proofread my essay. I'm a Swedish student and my English is not perfect... The essay is about the working conditions in the garment industry in India.

I'd really appreciate the help.

Best regards, Kristina

[RonBee]

Hello everybody!
I'd like to ask if there is someone that could help me to proofread my essay. I'm a Swedish student and my English is not perfect... The essay is about the working conditions in the garment industry in India.

I'd really appreciate the help.

Best regards, Kristina

Your English looks darn good to me. In fact, it's nearly perfect.

Please post your essay here on the forum so nobody has to open an attachment in order to read it.

Post something, and I will comment on it.