Could you help me this short essay? Process

[kid101]

This is my short essay with the topic: How paper is manufactured
Could you check it? Thanks so much


Paper is one of the most important materials in the world and these days

paper technology producing is developing. This report will describe how

paper is manufactured.

Firstly, the process starts with the tree after felling the tree is finished,

logs are stacked by the machine.Subsequently, after transporting logs to

the mill is over, logs are unloaded at the mill. Thirdly, before bleaching

the pulp, the log is reduced to wood chips, the next step is added

water.After this mixture is called '" pulp ". The pulp is beaten and added

glue and resin together. At the same time, after mixture passing through

wire screens is over, water is removed by the machine then paper is dried

and glazed.Finally, after cutting to the correct size, paper is going to be

sold.

[Anglika]

This is my short essay with the topic: How paper is manufactured
Could you check it? Thanks so much


Paper is one of the most important materials in the world and these days

paper technology producing [omit]is developing. This report will describe how

paper is manufactured.

Firstly, the process starts with the tree. After felling the tree is finished, [After the tree is felled]

logs are stacked by machine.Subsequently, after transporting logs to

the mill is over, logs are unloaded at the mill. Thirdly, before bleaching

the pulp, the log is reduced to wood chips. The next step is the addition of

water. This mixture is called '"pulp". The pulp is beaten and glue and resin added to it . The resulting mixture is passed over wire screens, the water is removed and then the paper is dried

and glazed. Finally, after cutting to the correct size, paper is going to be

sold.

You mention that bleaching is to be done, but do not say when it is done.

Most paper produced by this method will be sold by the roll.