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Old 01-Oct-2004, 17:09
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You have an English friend called Lee. You are both going to another friend’s birthday party next week.

Write an e-mail to Lee. In your e-mail, you should

· Say how you will get there
· Suggest you go together
· Ask him for advice about a present.

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Dear Lee

We will go to friend’s birthday party next week by car. I would like to go with you to party and make interesting there with friend’s.
I advice with we going to him party and buy quitter for him .

Love,
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Lee,

I'm going to the party by taxi- why don't we go together and share it? By the way, have you got any ideas for a present I could get for her?

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sir if you can give me a nice Suggest
and a nice advice about a present


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Helllllllllllllllo some one here give me suggest or advice about present
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