A peaceful morning

[red55C]

I woke up in the morning at 5:30AM.
It was such a peaceful morning that everything was slow and quiet.
You must want to know why Lan have to wake up so early ?
Because I have an appointment with my friends in the swimming pool today.
Last night Franky and Lisa invited me to go to swimming pool together at 6AM .
I said I 'd like to go but "depends on the situation" .I don't think I could wake up so early!!
I am lazy Lan.

And guess what?
I just woke up after I heard the alarm .
It seems like my body really want to go swimming and I must wake up .
We started to swimming at about 6:30.The pool was a indoor pool and the water was clean.

After the long distance swimming (about 1000 meter),both of us were really tired.
Then we took a shower ,heading to Mcdonalds to had the breakfasts.

It's a good begining of the summer vacation.

[RonBee]

I woke up in the morning at 5:30AM.

(You could say: "I woke up in the morning at 5:30.")

It was such a peaceful morning that everything was slow and quiet.

It was a peaceful morning. Everything was slow and quiet.

The original sentence suggests that it was slow and quiet because it was a peaceful morning. (Cause and effect.)

You must want to know why Lan have to wake up so early ?

You might want to know why I had to wake up so early.

Don't space before end marks (periods, question marks, exclamation marks).

Because I have an appointment with my friends in the swimming pool today.

I promised my friends I would meet them at the swimming pool today.

Last night Franky and Lisa invited me to go to swimming pool together at 6AM .
I said I 'd like to go but "depends on the situation" .I don't think I could wake up so early!!
I am lazy Lan.

Last night Frankie and Lisa asked me if I would meet them at the swimming pool today at 6AM. I said I'd like to go, but I didn't think I could wake up so early. I am lazy Lan.

And guess what?
I just woke up after I heard the alarm .
It seems like my body really want to go swimming and I must wake up .
We started to swimming at about 6:30.The pool was a indoor pool and the water was clean.

And guess what? I woke up right after I heard the alarm. We started swimming at about 6:30. The pool is an indoor pool, and the water was clean.

After the long distance swimming (about 1000 meter),both of us were really tired.
Then we took a shower ,heading to Mcdonalds to had the breakfasts.

It's a good begining of the summer vacation.

After a really good workout (swimming about 1000 meters), both of us were really tired. We took a shower then headed to McDonalds for breakfast.

It was a good beginning to summer vacation.

[curmudgeon]

both of us were really tired....
I think there were three of you

[RonBee]

both of us were really tired....
I think there were three of you

Good point! It should be All of us were really tired. Unless, of course, only two of them went swimming.