Help with sentences

[dean]

Can somebody please help me with the English?
Regards,
Dean

1-Given the paucity of this information, it will be useful for future research to conduct a comparative international study based on the Austrian study which was published in 1982.

2- Most nursing journals rely part of their revenue from profit gained from advertisements provided by pharmaceutical companies. By accepting advertisements to be published in their journals, nursing journals have to accept dependent relationship with the industry.

3. Dependence on revenue from the industry may minimize the independence of nursing journal.

4- Results from our review raise concerns whether this conflict of interest may reduce the quality of information provided in advertisements in nursing journals.

[susiedqq]

What do you want help with?


1-Given the paucity of this information, it will be useful for future research to conduct a comparative international study based on the Austrian study which was published in 1982.

2- Most nursing journals rely part of their revenue from profit gained from advertisements provided by pharmaceutical companies. By accepting pharmaceutical advertisements to be published in their journals, medical journals have to accept dependent relationship with the industry. Are they forced?

3. Dependence on revenue from the industry may minimize the independence of medical journal.

4- Results from our review raise concerns whether this conflict of interest may reduce the quality of information provided in advertisements ??- I am sure you mean the educational content in nursing journals.

[dean]

Hi Susuieddq,

If possible I would like to know if the sentences are grammatically correct.

Regards,

Dean