English Language Discussion Forums


Go Back   UsingEnglish.com ESL Forum > Learning English > Editing & Writing Topics

Quick Links
Sites for Teachers


Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Display Modes
  #1  
Old 17-Sep-2008, 12:51
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Dec 2007
Country: Italy
Posts: 79
Current Location: Trento
First Language: italian
Member Type: Student or Learner
gx90t is on a distinguished road
Default can you correct,please?!?!?2

now i have to write down some lines about marriage!!
can you correct them please???!?

The marriage has an important role in life. In fact you have to spend your life mear the person you got married to. The meaning nowadays can be misunderstand becuase a lot of people decide to separate after it.
i think about the marriage as a change in life of a person,only we have to make a good decision.

thanks in advanceeeee!!!

have a nice day!!!=)=)=)=)=)
Reply With Quote
Sponsored Links
  #2  
Old 19-Sep-2008, 00:09
Anglika's Avatar
Moderator
 
Join Date: Oct 2006
Country: UK
Posts: 18,921
Current Location: UK
First Language: English
Member Type: Other
Anglika has a reputation beyond reputeAnglika has a reputation beyond reputeAnglika has a reputation beyond reputeAnglika has a reputation beyond reputeAnglika has a reputation beyond reputeAnglika has a reputation beyond reputeAnglika has a reputation beyond reputeAnglika has a reputation beyond reputeAnglika has a reputation beyond reputeAnglika has a reputation beyond reputeAnglika has a reputation beyond repute
Default Re: can you correct,please?!?!?2

Quote:
Originally Posted by gx90t View Post
now i have to write down some lines about marriage!!
can you correct them please???!?

The marriage has an important role in life. In fact you have to spend your life mear the person you got married to. The meaning nowadays can be misunderstand becuase a lot of people decide to separate after it.
i think about the marriage as a change in life of a person,only we have to make a good decision.

thanks in advanceeeee!!!

have a nice day!!!=)=)=)=)=)
How about answering these questions:

What is "marriage"?
What does it mean to people?
What is its value to society?
Does it have a value in society?
Reply With Quote
Reply

Bookmarks

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On



All times are GMT. The time now is 17:03.


vBulletin, Copyright ©2000 - 2009, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Search Engine Optimization by vBSEO 3.3.0
Copyright © 2002 - 2009 UsingEnglish.com