pls correct my comment, thanks!

[THG]

Dear All;
This is my comment about the article that its content is impacts of inflow of Foreign Direct Investment (FDI) to XZY nation's development and some other problems.
Pls take a look and correct them. Thank you very much!





Recently, FDI is one of the most important capitals and has a huge contribution for XYZ’s economy. The Government makes a lot of efforts to attract more FDI by launching many clear policies and laws or locating easily its natural resources for foreign investors.

This article emphasizes to seven critical problems and its impact to XYZ. The Government has not yet been concern about the efficiency of investment but cares a lot of growth rates. The Government could not also control all projects in order to make sure they are really suitable for future development. Moreover, vital environment is a big trouble.

To sum up, the article also cites the ideas of some economic experts, which warned threats of FDI for future development if the Government does not think carefully about when approves the licenses of investment for new FDI projects.

[THG]

It seems no one would like to correct my writing here!

[Raymott]

Dear All;
This is my comment about the article that its content is impacts of inflow of Foreign Direct Investment (FDI) to XZY nation's development and some other problems.
Pls take a look and correct them. Thank you very much!


Recently, FDI is has become one of the most important sources of capital and has makes a huge contribution for to XYZ’s economy. The Government makes a lot of efforts to attract more FDI by launching many clear policies and laws or locating easily making available [?] its natural resources for foreign investors.

This article emphasizes to seven critical problems and its impact to on XYZ. The Government has not yet been concerned about the efficiency of investment but cares a lot of about growth rates. The Government also cannot control all projects in order to make sure they are really suitable for future development. Moreover, vital sustainable environment is a big trouble problem/issue.

To sum up, the article also cites the ideas of some economic experts, which who
warned of threats of to FDI for future development if the Government does not think carefully about when it approves the investment licenses of for new FDI projects.

Suggest delete underlined. Add blue

[THG]

Dear Raymott

I wrote my writing with so many mistakes. Next time I need to check it carefully.

Thanks you very much for your help.