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I know if you asked someonepeople if they have a person that has been important for them in any way, most of those people would answer “yes”. For instance I asked that same question to of my best friend, my Mom and a random person in the streets and guess what - I found out each and every one of them had a person they thought was the most important for them and their own reasons. For example, my friend's most important person is his mother because she loves him, shows him valuable things and she brought him to into this world. My Mom's most important person in her life is my uncle Francisco because he is responsible, he is a person you can trust and he shows that family always comes first. In my case the person that is the most important for me is my Dad because he thought taught me how to be a gentleman. I like the way he never gives up - and most important he has been always there for me.
My Dad has thought taught me how to be a gentleman: it seems like simple stuff, like been being polite, helping others or, if you are going out with someone, open the door for them, pull the chair out. Thanks to all of these suggestions I give respect and I receive respect back, and at the same time it feels nice.
The other reason I choose my Dad is that he never seems to give up. For example, we moved here like omit seven years ago and what my Dad has accomplished during those seven year are to have his own shop, own a house and other things. Also he is studying the citizenship test and learning English as well. The one l thing I can say he never seems ceases to amaze me.
But the most important reason I choose my Dad is that he has always been there for me, like the time my mother told me that my parent was next to father stayed beside me after the doctors put me on a incubator into an incubator and he stayed with me for the all week, talking to me, or the time I when went to the operation room operating theater because I was going to have surgery. He was there when I finally wake woke up. or even omitWhen I got run out over by a car and fractured my leg, my father was the first to arrive at the hospital. He is also there when I need to talked talk to someone. I consider my father like a friend I can always count on.
There is always someone that has impact your life one way or another. It could be a friend, member of your family, teacher or a complete stranger, but in the end it is all the same. all they do is been there They are the ones who are there when you need them the most. You just have to realize your never alone and thank those people.
You really must work on ending and starting sentences properly. Punctuation is there for a reason.
Also, you should be consistent in the words you are using - either my Dad or my father, not both.
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