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can u correct plssss....as soon as possibleee!!!
This is a summary of a well-known story:"the Emperor's new cloth".
Can you help me in improving the text by changing words or sentences in order to sounds more english and less italian,plzzzz!!!!
One day 2 cheats arrived in town where there was an Emperor very fond on cloths. They told him they could weave beatiful cloth. They add that only people who are clever and fit for their office could see them.
The Emperor was very interesting in this special cloth. While they was still weaving, the Emperor send a Minister for seeing them. But the Minister couldn't see nothing, so he was afraid of seeming stupid. He decided to tell they were magnificent.
Another Minister was sent to the cheats by the Emperor to see how much the work was going on. But he couldn't see nothing too but hye praised the cloth too for fear of seeming stupid.
Finally when the cloth was ready, the cheats called the Emperor and he was proposed to put on the new cloth in the public procession.
The Emperor wore the cloth but nobody was able to tell him he was undressed. The Emperor realised he had been cheated as soon as a little child,the only one that speak with sincerity, said he had nothing on.
many thanks in advanceeee!!!!!=)=)
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