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Rapid thunders, with sparse rain, broke out glaring lights, and each time a thunderflash broke into the window, it would lightly and clearly reflect the greenstem forsythia on the windowsill onto the curtain, and then vanish. But the shadow remained impressed in my eyeground, I thought I've caught a "natural" monochrome painting, for the first time.
With a permission, I took a walk in the dusk of the evening. Cool breeze played me, and I felt so weak in my slow walking. But in the weakness, I felt an indescribable pleasure, as if riding on a boat in the sea when I was a child.
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