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Old 07-Dec-2008, 12:01
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Make paragraphs. Also, make sure every sentence has a verb.
Learn how to write a sentence and paragraph!
Writing Tips: Paragraph Builder - WritingDEN
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Check for spelling mistakes.

What is the topic of your essay?


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Rewrite your essay one paragraph at a time. Then post it here - one paragraph at a time.


Reread it and then rewrite it. Assume it needs improvement. Don't be afraid to throw things out.


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Sorry but I can't post it here, otherwise anyone could find it through google..
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