please, check my sentence

[changeling]

Hi everybody!

Does my sentence make sense?
We are interested to see what their relationships will become.
Thanks in advance

[Dawood Usmani]

Originally Posted by changeling

Hi everybody!

Does my sentence make sense?
We are interested to see what their relationships will become.
Thanks in advance

Your sentence looks fine to me.
Dawood

[Raymott]

Originally Posted by changeling

Hi everybody!

Does my sentence make sense?
We are interested to see what their relationships will become.
Thanks in advance

It sounds a little awkward, but it's not wrong. Here are some more choices:
More colloquially:
"We are interested in seeing how their relationship/s will turn out." (or "work out")
"We are interested to see what will become of their relationships." This means how they will end up; without being concerned with all the details.
If you only mean between two people, use "relationship".

If you have a group of 4 or 5 people, you might say:
"We are interested to see what will become of their various relationships."
"We are interested to see what relationships will develop among them."

[Dawood Usmani]

Originally Posted by Raymott

It sounds a little awkward, but it's not wrong. Here are some more choices:
More colloquially:
"We are interested in seeing how their relationship/s will turn out." (or "work out")
"We are interested to see what will become of their relationships." This means how they will end up; without being concerned with all the details.
If you only mean between two people, use "relationship".

If you have a group of 4 or 5 people, you might say:
"We are interested to see what will become of their various relationships."
"We are interested to see what relationships will develop among them."

Smart answer!