
Originally Posted by
thod00
For the making of the 50 Euro many of the rewriting is I think to need. Not enough for mistake of the grammar alone. Thinks me Bhai is good for the writing with.
To earn 50 euros you would, I think, need to do a rewrite. It would not be enough to correct the grammar. I think Bhai would be good for it.

Originally Posted by
thod00
Even in the corrected form, presented in the previous post, it is clearly not the work of a native speaker. Almost every sentence could be phrased more elegantly. This is the question I have to consider when looking at the pieces presented in this forum. To simply correct the grammar, or to rewrite into a more natural form? Correct grammar can still leave the piece seeming clumsy. For a paid service, I would assume the client would want it to the best of my ability, which would be a rewrite.
That was my point. Just because a sentence is grammatical that doesn't mean it makes sense. A rewrite would have to do more than correct grammar and spelling. It would have to bring clarity where there is none.