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[dado1]

I would be very grateful if you can check this text

Hi everyone and thanks for visiting my site.

As you can see this site is about musicians, singers and bands.

Why did I make this site?
I was watching American Idol on YouTube few months ago and I saw a lot of good singers there. I was really enchanted by David Archuleta. He has very good voice even he had problem with his throat.
Right now in my country is showing similar show to American idol.

So I decided to make website where singers and bands can show how amazing they are.

What you can do here? How you can show how good I am?
You are able to do a lot of things.
You are able to
1. add your videos so people can SEE who you are. So they can SEE your talent, not just to hear it.
2. add your MP3s and Albums
3. create your profile
4. add new gigs or events
5. search for other bands and singers
6. join to forum
And much more.

You can test everything to see how it works.

TEST ACCOUNT FOR
BANDS
User name: Band
PASS: 123456

SINGERS
User name: Singer
PASS: 123456

Is everything free?
Yes, everything is 100% free.

[RonBee]

Try:

You could tell he has a good voice even though he had problems with his throat.

Right now in my country a show similar to American Idol is airing.

So I decided to make a website....


How can I show people how good I am?

[RonBee]

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