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Question Correction of some sentences for tomorrow

Are these sentences correct? Thank you..I need it for tomorrow....

However, on second thoughts, they remembered that, that morning, they completely failed in their job by forgetting to feed their beasts because of some mysterious events they refused to comment on.

You will discover every Russian Revolution and communist government secret applications…through Animal Farm.

The book George Orwell decided to call 'Animal Farm' contains a few hidden messages.

All five of them were in full flight down the cart-track that led to the main road, with the animals pursuing them.

Through his characters' behaviours, this famous author popularized one of the most important twenty century realities, a historic event.

He picked that title probably because he wanted to show what he thought about the Russian Revolution.

Clearly, old Major believes that Man can only do harm and that animals are only able to do good.

According to him, Mollie is a shallow materialist, concerned only with her own image and comforts.

That animal race, which manipulates the others, forces its company on them and retorts that pigs should be that superior quality food owners to see through the farm production. This is a lie.
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