Any suggestion how to improve my essay

[mejiar81]

I am in need of suggestions of how to improve my essay
I am also looking for someone who can point me out what is wrong with it so i can fix it before turn it in to my English professor. I really need to get an A grade.

[Monticello]

I am in need of suggestions of how to improve my essay
I am also looking for someone who can point me out what is wrong with it so i can fix it before turn it in to my English professor. I really need to get an A grade.

Hi mejiar81,

Not that you might intend anything malicious ..., but it's a well-known fact that documents may contain corrupting computer viruses.

You might get more responses by copying and posting your entire essay for review here within this thread.

[mejiar81]

Thank you.
I guess you are rigth, Ill do that