bad english! essay

[Ofelia]

hello everybody!
English isnt my native language so i have a problem with writting essay. i am on a dental asisstant`s program
write a one -page paper ( a complete page in Times New Roman, 12 pt front size with a minimum of three paragraphs) of a meaningful experience based on a negative or positive experience occuring during the clinical rotation. paper will be evaluated on: content (20 points), gramma (20 points), spelling (20), and punctuation (20) and format(20).

[Ofelia]

my essay in Microsoft Word formate
guys! plz help me!!!!!!!!

[Ofelia]

guys! i still have some time? plz help me to corerct it

[Raymott]

hello everybody!
English isnt my native language so i have a problem with writting essay. i am on a dental asisstant`s program and the final exam is essay.

Hello Ofelia,
If this is a final exam, then they are examining you, not us. Your examiners can already assume that someone on the 'net can write a good essay. What they want to know is whether you can.
Your essay should pass. You've made a few errors in the use of articles ("the, a"). It would look better left-aligned, and you should change the hyphens into dashes to be consistent.
Good Luck

[Ofelia]

you dont understand! guys! its not english class exam! i am on dental program!!!!! i am not in school or something! we didnt have any english classes or essays before! its just a part of my jurnal to write essay about my experiance! there is nothing about english class at all!

[Raymott]

you dont understand! guys! its not english class exam! i am on dental program!!!!! i am not in school or something! they dont care if i wrote it or someone else/ because other girls asked someone help to and i have nobody to ask! we didnt have any english classes or essays before! its just a part of my jurnal to write essay about my experiance! there is nothing about english class at all!

I think it sounds more authentic in Russian-English. They want to know how you express yourself. You've managed to do this well enough. If you submit an essay in perfect English, but can't reproduce that later, they'll know the essay wasn't entirely yours. That could go against you.
Still, someone else can correct it if they like.

[Ofelia]

I think it sounds more authentic in Russian-English. They want to know how you express yourself. You've managed to do this well enough. If you submit an essay in perfect English, but can't reproduce that later, they'll know the essay wasn't entirely yours. That could go against you.
Still, someone else can correct it if they like.

thats what i need! i think its not someone`s problem if it goes against me! its my problem if it happens! i just need to help me to correct it! but i guess nobody wants to do it for some reason! i didnt look for someone`s critics but help!

[Searching for language]

thats what i need! i think its not someone`s problem if it goes against me! its my problem if it happens! i just need to help me to correct it! but i guess nobody wants to do it for some reason! i didnt look for someone`s critics but help!

I agree that your essay is good. The few mistakes that are underlined in red through the program, you can look up in your dictionary and correct. I notice that in the paragraph that is quoted here, you are not capitalizing "I". Check that you have done so in your essay.

There are many native speakers whose written English is not nearly as good as yours.

[Ofelia]

thanks you very much! i found someone to correct my essay!