So what would be the result on 16th of May? No prize for guessing, everyone knows that none of the political parties will get clear majority, it would be a hung parliament. The real battle for the power will begin after the results, the two major parties – BJP & Congress, will go all out to woo small regional parties to form the next Government. At that point of time, no one would take country’s interests into consideration, only thing they would consider will be how to grab the top seat in the parliament.
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So what would be the result on 16th of May? No prize for guessing. Everyone knows that none of the political parties will get clear majority. There will (Use will or would in BOTH sentences. Don't mix them.) be a hung parliament. The real battle for the power will begin after the results when the two major parties – BJP & Congress - will go all out to woo small regional parties to form the next Government. At that point in time, no one will (or maybe use will be likely to) take country’s interests into consideration. The only thing on their minds will be how to grab the top (Should that be the majority of seats instead of top seat) seat in the parliament.
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