would you plz check my homwork & make it better

[arefeh]

according to my pervius idea and my class work, my plan was to creat somthing that i can related on interior design.
as my project based on making a hole, the best way to peresnt it, was use a light, so i decided to creat my own lamp shape.

[arefeh]

according to my pervius idea and my class work, my plan was to creat somthing that i can related on interior design.
as my project based on making a hole, the best way to peresnt it, was use a light, so i decided to creat my own lamp shape.

first of all, i used the magaznis' model but i have to use a parimary sorce, so i tooke picture form my friends to make ir more personal.