Banner: BOW TIE KEEP YOUR ELECTION PROMISE

[Williamyh]

Hi All,

In English Grammar, do you think the banner english is incorrect?
BOW TIE KEEP YOUR ELECTION PROMISE

PS: BOW TIE is the nickname of Donald Tsang.

WYH

[Excalibur]

It's the punctuation:

BOW TIE: KEEP YOUR ELECTION PROMISE

Politicians usually have several proposed policies going into an election - their 'promises'. That the headline talks of one 'promise' suggests that there is some very major issue that predominates in the election ( equivalent in Britain to 'we promise to pull Britain out of the E.U'/ 'to reject adoption of the Euro').

[Williamyh]

It's the punctuation:

BOW TIE: KEEP YOUR ELECTION PROMISE

Politicians usually have several proposed policies going into an election - their 'promises'. That the headline talks of one 'promise' suggests that there is some very major issue that predominates in the election ( equivalent in Britain to 'we promise to pull Britain out of the E.U'/ 'to reject adoption of the Euro').

That means the English grammar is incorrect, right? because it was lack of punctuation of :

[Excalibur]

No.

They are two different aspects of language.

If you are trying to make an argument/win a bet: you lose.

[Williamyh]

No.

They are two different aspects of language.

If you are trying to make an argument/win a bet: you lose.

No...I am not going to make an argument. I just wanted to know if the English in the banner is correct or not....just wanted to know the answer....that's it...