Why have you come to England?

[Hucky]

Hello Hucky! I do really appreciate your situation as a non-native speaker. Me too, I'm a non native speaker and it happens for me so many times. But once, someone advise me to use a simple, correct and comprehensible English in order to avoid gramatical mistakes. So, you gave us two sentences, and all of us agree that the first one which is correct. So, use the one you find easy and correct, I promise your English gonna be good and the most important thing is to have a pure English.

Good luck

Karima

Dear Karima,

Thanks a lot for the kind lines you dropped. Even between the lines I can feel the joy you have in learning English. Thank you also for your promise! I really do hope it will come to fruition one day. And I for my part appreciate your enthusiasm. It was nice to hear from you. So I send you my best greetings over there to Algeria and remain for the time being with the best wishes for a good night!

Hucky

[Karima-19]

Anybody recommending pure English is well-advised to avoid the slang term gonna.

Rover

I'm sorry Rover! you are right about using the slang term "gonna". I forget that I'm writing in a language learning forum where we should use standard English not colloquial one, I'm sorry again.

[Karima-19]

Dear Karima,

Thanks a lot for the kind lines you dropped. Even between the lines I can feel the joy you have in learning English. Thank you also for your promise! I really do hope it will come to fruition one day. And I for my part appreciate your enthusiasm. It was nice to hear from you. So I send you my best greetings over there to Algeria and remain for the time being with the best wishes for a good night!

Hucky

Thanks again Hucky, hope you all the best too.

Good luck

Regards

Karima

[SanMar]

I'm sorry Rover! you are right about using the slang term "gonna". I forget that I'm writing in a language learning forum where we should use standard English not colloquial one, I'm sorry again.

Native speakers do the same thing occasionally. (Well at least I do! )
Learning a language can be really challenging but well worth it, as I'm sure you already know.
Good luck

Not a teacher.