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like the Terminator zipping away on his kinetic, OR?
I've just read this piece of paragraph, and I found the dual meaning in it:
ORIGINAL:
"It was for two people, but Steve carried both of us; we went to class, canteen and on rare occasions to movies like the Terminator zipping away on his kinetic."
ALTERNATIVE 1:
"It was for two people, but Steve carried both of us; we went to class, canteen and on rare occasions to movies, like the Terminator zipping away on his kinetic."
OR
ALTERNATIVE 2:
"It was for two people, but Steve carried both of us; we went to class, canteen and on rare occasions to movieslike the Terminator, zipping away on his kinetic."
Which one is more appropriate? For their meanings are totally different.
Thanks :D
Selviya87
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