1Likes
I think there are the happy stories too, it depends what we choose to read.
Results 1 to 10 of 10
- 29-Sep-2012, 14:29 #1
Newbie
- Join Date
- Sep 2012
- Posts
- 30
How can improve this Occupation/art/hobby of face reading it's maybe harmful for a sensitive humans. because written each n every face have a painful story.
- 29-Sep-2012, 15:37 #2
Junior Member
- Join Date
- Oct 2005
- Posts
- 71
Re: How can improve this
- 29-Sep-2012, 18:43 #3
Newbie
- Join Date
- Sep 2012
- Posts
- 30
Re: How can improve this @ lyfen: no doubt you're right but your think is mirror of dream and my quotation nearby to real world. Today you easily find out but a real happy face you find rarely. happiness not stay forever with us but ofcourse: sadness never gone from amature life.
Originally Posted by lyfen 
I think there are the many happy stories too, it depends what we choose to read.
- 29-Sep-2012, 19:06 #4
Newbie
- Join Date
- Sep 2012
- Posts
- 18
Re: How can improve this Occupation/art/hobby of face-reading may be harmful to sensitive humans because every face writes painful story every day.
- 30-Sep-2012, 05:34 #5
Newbie
- Join Date
- Sep 2012
- Posts
- 30
Re: How can improve this @ AppleRome. What you think about thisHabits of face-reading may be harmful to sensitive humans because every face writes painful story every day. Originally Posted by AppleRome Occupation/art/hobby of face-reading may be harmful to sensitive humans because every face writes painful story every day.
- 30-Sep-2012, 05:46 #6
Newbie
- Join Date
- Sep 2012
- Posts
- 30
Re: How can improve this Hello@AppleRome. What you think about saying like that. its something better than before post. but as per my think: its not perfect. maybe for much better making this quote possibilities also available here.Habits of face-reading may be harmful to sensitive humans because every face writes painful story every day. Originally Posted by AppleRome Occupation/art/hobby of face-reading may be harmful to sensitive humans because every face writes painful story every day.
- 30-Sep-2012, 07:24 #7
Junior Member
- Join Date
- Oct 2005
- Posts
- 71
Re: How can improve this i think you are right, i believe in destiny, but i think, being happy it depends on us,as being positive way is essential in the life. Originally Posted by Mak_786
- 30-Sep-2012, 07:46 #8
Newbie
- Join Date
- Sep 2012
- Posts
- 18
Re: How can improve this "Habits" sounds perfect with the sentence, nonetheless, dont your ownself also want to make it wider as "occupation" since it is also a kind of job? Maybe you can elaborate your paragraph by doing that. Originally Posted by Mak_786
NOT A TEACHER, JUST SISSY
.
- 30-Sep-2012, 09:25 #9
Newbie
- Join Date
- Sep 2012
- Posts
- 30
Re: How can improve this Thanks@ AppleHome {_I accept you as Sissy_} Thank you so much for that.Take care yourself
Originally Posted by AppleRome "Habits" sounds perfect with the sentence, nonetheless, dont your ownself also want to make it wider as "occupation" since it is also a kind of job? Maybe you can elaborate your paragraph by doing that.NOT A TEACHER, JUST SISSY.
- 30-Sep-2012, 09:28 #10
Newbie
- Join Date
- Sep 2012
- Posts
- 30
Re: How can improve this I'm Sorry for this mistake Originally Posted by Mak_786
Similar Threads
-
[Essay] Could please someone help me to improve it?
By jshao0301 in forum Editing & Writing TopicsReplies: 0Last Post: 06-Jan-2010, 02:50 -
improve
By kohyoongliat in forum Ask a TeacherReplies: 3Last Post: 27-Mar-2007, 07:56 -
how would you improve this?
By danielkramer in forum Editing & Writing TopicsReplies: 2Last Post: 20-Nov-2005, 13:10 -
how would you improve this?
By danielkramer in forum Editing & Writing TopicsReplies: 3Last Post: 18-Nov-2005, 04:05
Posting Permissions
Search Engine Optimization by vBSEO 3.6.1