Forum newsfeeds
Forum Newsfeeds


Sites for Teachers

Sites for Teachers


Go Back   UsingEnglish.com ESL Forum > Learning English > General Language Discussions
Register FAQDonate Members List Mark Forums Read Tags

Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Display Modes
  #11 (permalink)  
Old 04-Dec-2006, 12:27
Newbie
 
Join Date: Nov 2006
Country: Vietnam
Location: Vietnam
First Language: Vietnamese
Posts: 15
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
sweetheart is on a distinguished road
Default Re: Hello. Need your help

I feel that I'm very confused to write a complex sentence. Thank you for your help. Please help me correct this cover letter

Dear Ms Phuong Thao,


Safety Engineer

I have read your recruitment advertisement on the website kiemviec.com. I’m very interested in working at this position.

You will see from the enclosed resume that I have just graduated university in 2005. I had no many experiences but I suppose that it is not too important. I will learn and work as hard as possible if I am recruited to work in your company .

I can be easy to demonstrate it to you. I spent 2 months to practise in Engineering Staff of Colgate-Palmolive company. That was not too long time but it was quite enough for the manager to assess my ability very well and one thing I also use to demonstrate to you is my thesis to be assessed 9/10.

If you feel that my qualifications are suitable, I can be available for interview at short notice. Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely,
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote
  #12 (permalink)  
Old 05-Dec-2006, 02:40
curmudgeon's Avatar
Moderator
 
Join Date: Mar 2006
Country: Scotland
Location: England
First Language: English
Posts: 1,605
Thanks: 0
Thanked 7 Times in 7 Posts
curmudgeon is on a distinguished road
Default Re: Hello. Need your help

Quote:
Originally Posted by sweetheart View Post
I feel that I'm very confused to write a complex sentence. Thank you for your help. Please help me correct this cover letter

Dear Ms Phuong Thao,


Re: Safety Engineer


I read with interest your advertisement for the above post on the kiemviec.com. website and would be grateful if you could consider me for this post.


Please find enclosed my resume and other information in support of my application. I realize that I do not have a great deal of experience but can assure you that I am conscientious and willing to learn, and given the opportunity I will make every effort to be an asset to your company.

During my two months practice placement with the Engineering Staff of Colgate-Palmolive company I was able to demonstrate to the manager my capabilities. I also gained a 90% mark for my thesis.


I can attend an interview at any time that suits you.

Thank you for your attention.

Sincerely,

Good luck!
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote
  #13 (permalink)  
Old 05-Dec-2006, 10:58
Newbie
 
Join Date: Nov 2006
Country: Vietnam
Location: Vietnam
First Language: Vietnamese
Posts: 15
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
sweetheart is on a distinguished road
Default Re: Hello. Need your help

Thank you so much Curmudgeon. Please help me correct this CV.


CURRICULUM VITAE
[IMG]file:///C:/DOCUME%7E1/LENGOC%7E1/LOCALS%7E1/Temp/msohtml1/01/clip_image002.jpg[/IMG]


LÊ NGỌC HIỀN
Mobile: 0908370824
Email address: EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead

Birthday: January 10th, 1984
Gender: female
Marital status: single


EDUCATION:
-Engineering in Environmental Technology in Nong Lam University (graduated in November 2005)
-I practised labour safety, management environment of factory (including waste solid, waste water, and air pollution)


EXPERIENCES:
-I was a Mathematics tutor for the 6th and 8th Form students
-Have one year’s experience in designing waste water treatment system; environmental consultant, doing EIA (environmental impact assessment)

EMPLOYMENT:
-Vinhlong Environment and Resource Engineering Center December 2005 – June 2006
-I have done a part time job as designing waste water treatment system and doing EIA recently.

COMPUTER SKILLS: AutoCad, MS Office (Word, Excel, Power Point), Mapinfo

FOREIGN LANGUAGE SKILLS: speak and write English pretty well; reading comprehension English and environmental documents

OTHER RELEVANT SKILLS: possess fairly good communication, interpersonal and organisational skills

INTERESTS: computer, internet, news, languages, ping-pong
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote
  #14 (permalink)  
Old 06-Dec-2006, 02:04
RonBee's Avatar
Moderator
 
Join Date: Feb 2003
Country: USA
Location: North Carolina
First Language: English
Posts: 11,766
Thanks: 25
Thanked 234 Times in 220 Posts
RonBee has a spectacular aura aboutRonBee has a spectacular aura aboutRonBee has a spectacular aura about
Default Re: Hello. Need your help

Use solid waste instead of waste solid.

~R
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote
  #15 (permalink)  
Old 06-Dec-2006, 08:16
Newbie
 
Join Date: Nov 2006
Country: Vietnam
Location: Vietnam
First Language: Vietnamese
Posts: 15
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
sweetheart is on a distinguished road
Default Re: Hello. Need your help

Quote:
Originally Posted by RonBee View Post
Use solid waste instead of waste solid.

~R
Thank you so much RonBee.
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote
Reply
Tags:




Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On


All times are GMT. The time now is 04:34.



vBulletin, Copyright ©2000 - 2008, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Search Engine Friendly URLs by vBSEO 3.1.0
Copyright © 2002 - 2008 UsingEnglish.com