Well, the Cranberries managed to make "gun" and "bomb" rhymeOriginally Posted by RonBee
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Give me a minute.Originally Posted by Cooler
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Originally Posted by RonBee
Well, in that case it was a polite way of saying that the two things (politics and sports) don't have a darned thing to do with each other. Or shouldn't, at least.Originally Posted by Cooler
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Originally Posted by RonBee
I don't think "ambiguous" is the right word here. You just didn't say what you meant to say.Originally Posted by Cooler
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Originally Posted by RonBee
Originally Posted by Cooler
Originally Posted by RonBee
Okay, I'll do my best. With your help perhaps I can make something of it.Originally Posted by Cooler
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[Edited to properly attribute Cooler's words to him.]
Originally Posted by RonBee
I know "here and here" don't rhyme,
couldn't I just take the last three letters
as one type of rhyme?
The 're' of here and there rhyme. :DCode:When it's bedtime here, I say 'Morning' there. When daytime is no fun, I say 'Good night', Ron.
The first two lines have five counts each. :D
The last two lines have different counts:
3rd: When ' day ' time ' is ' no ' fun (6)
4th: I ' say ' Good ' night ' Ron (5)
The 3rd line has 6 counts, whereas the 4th line has 5 counts.
The words 'here' and 'there' share a near-rhyme pattern, whereas the words 'fun' and 'Ron' do not. :(
4th: I say "Good night", good Sun. 8)
(Ron is the Sun) :D
Originally Posted by Casiopea
(A five year old girl is humming along the poem)
When it's bedtime here,
I say 'Morning' there.
When daytime's no fun,
I say 'Good night', Run.
She is just at the early stage of phonology acqusition.
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While "here" and "there" don't really rhyme, you can make them rhyme if you do it just right, but it can be tricky. I think your last one works just fine. Let's take one more look at it.Originally Posted by blacknomi
- When it's bedtime here,
I say 'Morning' there.
When daytime's no fun,
I say 'Good night', Run.
The emphasis put on certain syllables makes all the differences. I do like sun better than run there, and if you put enough stress on sun you really don't need the extra syllable.
(I've written about a thousand or so poems myself, especially if you count all the couplets. :wink: )
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[Well, "here" and "there" don't rhyme. And "fun" and "Ron" don't rhyme. Other than that, not bad.
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As long as they go together :wink:
"Here" and "there" are a pair
That you can't take anywhere.
:wink: