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21-Sep-2004, 06:55
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 Any suggestions? The symptoms may differ from person to person. Not everyone will have all the same symptoms. Some people experience a few symptoms and some many symptoms. The severity of symptoms also varies with individuals. Any suggestions to abridge the above paragraph? |
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21-Sep-2004, 09:00
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| Re: Any suggestions? Quote:
The symptoms vary from one person to another in their intensity, number and severity.  |
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21-Sep-2004, 11:09
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| Thanks Natalie27. Excellent suggestion. Anyone else, please? |
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21-Sep-2004, 13:33
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| Natalie27's sentence is excellent IMO. One could save a few words, if that matters, with: The symptoms, and their severity, are patient dependent. You lose information; but I think it keeps the core meaning. FRC |
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