First of all THANK YOU very much for your help seba!
Okay, I tried to correct a few things, but I really don't know what to do with the stresses! We
have never really learned it and every
_time I read this passage to myself I put the stresses on different word
s. Maybe somebody
's got a few tips there?
Anyway I made some changes as you can see here:
About the "a". I think I got the first two right, but I am not sure about the "A speaker" at the beginning
of one sentence.
So I hope for more criticism! Really helps me! Thanks