easybreakable
Member
- Joined
- Feb 24, 2010
- Member Type
- Academic
- Native Language
- Arabic
- Home Country
- Libya
- Current Location
- Libya
I'd like to hear from you regarding this, I can't say I'm satisfied with some word choices and I feel something wrong with the grammars.
I recall my days with you
I recall my days with you
like someone sees things through the window of a fast train:
deserted and beautiful
impossible to grasp...
From time to another
let's be children again
let's grieve without false pride
The day I die
I will think about that bright moment
when we stood in the darkness
on the porch of decision
You said hatefully: "I love you"
I will remember your voice
and death comes pleasantly
will hold me like a womb of forgotten joy
and I will whisper in a similar hatred:
oh how much I loved you.
I recall my days with you
like someone sees things through the window of a fast train:
deserted and beautiful
impossible to grasp...
From time to another
let's be children again
let's grieve without false pride
The day I die
I will think about that bright moment
when we stood in the darkness
on the porch of decision
You said hatefully: "I love you"
I will remember your voice
and death comes pleasantly
will hold me like a womb of forgotten joy
and I will whisper in a similar hatred:
oh how much I loved you.