chowbarry
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- Apr 17, 2008
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Please help me improve the following short passage?
I write to express my great concern over the latest development concerning the re-installation of electronic mounted fan within the toilet of ABC park.
Last week, I had a telephone conversation with Mr. A of your department and he said that a new electronic mounted fan (the previous one was found to be stolen three months ago) was set to be reinstalled whilst a metal padlock was suggested to attach on it, which would cost a combination fees of $700. As our park toilet has been without a electronic mounted fan for months, we are truly aware of ever-increasing public discontent.
Please let me know your progress of reinstalling the electronic mounted as soon as possible, thank you for your attention!
Thank you!
I write to express my great concern over the latest development concerning the re-installation of electronic mounted fan within the toilet of ABC park.
Last week, I had a telephone conversation with Mr. A of your department and he said that a new electronic mounted fan (the previous one was found to be stolen three months ago) was set to be reinstalled whilst a metal padlock was suggested to attach on it, which would cost a combination fees of $700. As our park toilet has been without a electronic mounted fan for months, we are truly aware of ever-increasing public discontent.
Please let me know your progress of reinstalling the electronic mounted as soon as possible, thank you for your attention!
Thank you!