Ok, so I realize this is an odd request, but I am an American who's been interested in the dialects through the UK for a long time, and I wanted to share my impression of a Newcastle accent ( because I find it very mesmerizing) and to get some nice tips on what I'm doing wrong ( because I'm sure there are plenty of things).

Here's the sound clip, but I wanted to say before you listen that I mention youtube, because I made it to put up there but decided against that:

Geordie 1.mp3

thank you so much for listening and giving me your honest opinions and tips.
Sorry if I hurt your ears!!!