I don't have IPA so I can't read your transcription, but I can make some of it out.
The first vowel should be mid lax
I.
The second vowel should also be mid lax
I or schwa.
The third vowel is a diphthong
eI. <Sorry, my symbol
I is too big>
The forth vowel should be mid lax
I also.
The rest I can see and it looks very good.
Well done.
