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When I was 11 years old, I went to the pool. I used to go there all the time. One day, I went there with my brother and my friends, it was scary day. At 5 p.m. I jumped into the pool and drowned. In this essay, I am going to tell you what happened to me during that drowning, and what happened after that. Also, I will talk about why I loved swimming after a couple of months.
On that day, all people went outside because it was a nice day, but I went to the pool, I was happy there, and I thought that I was professional swimmer, but in fact I did not like it. I ran towards the pool and I jumped into it, I was shocked that I couldn’t swim very well, so I was immersed in the pool at the bottom. At the last moment, my brother jumped towards me and saved me by getting me out of the pool.
However, I went to the hospital and stayed there for a week. During that time I told myself that I will never go back to that pool forever. Indeed, I did not swim again, for a long period of time. Then my own thinking was changed about that idea. Actually, I missed the pool and I told myself that I had to swim again. Before I went back, I went to someone to teach me how to swim perfectly. I started to learn for five months and then I loved swimming, because I managed to learn how to swim.
In conclusion, I loved swimming and I went to the pool once or more in a week, My tip or advice to you reader is do not try to swim if you do not have any background in it.
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I need your help if I have any mistake in it. Also, if I have to change a way to say something. Thanks a lot!
On that day, all people went outside because it was a nice day, but I went to the pool, I was happy there, and I thought that I was professional swimmer, but in fact I did not like it. I ran towards the pool and I jumped into it, I was shocked that I couldn’t swim very well, so I was immersed in the pool at the bottom. At the last moment, my brother jumped towards me and saved me by getting me out of the pool.
However, I went to the hospital and stayed there for a week. During that time I told myself that I will never go back to that pool forever. Indeed, I did not swim again, for a long period of time. Then my own thinking was changed about that idea. Actually, I missed the pool and I told myself that I had to swim again. Before I went back, I went to someone to teach me how to swim perfectly. I started to learn for five months and then I loved swimming, because I managed to learn how to swim.
In conclusion, I loved swimming and I went to the pool once or more in a week, My tip or advice to you reader is do not try to swim if you do not have any background in it.
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I need your help if I have any mistake in it. Also, if I have to change a way to say something. Thanks a lot!