I need your advice

[happys82]

Dear teachers, I study at foreign languages faculty, I'll be English teacher in future. In our country it's difficult to find specialized techers , that can speak English fluently (maybe I don't know them). Of course,I don't want to be one of them. That's why I'm trying to do my best, in order to improve my English. Everyday I do some translations, can somebody check my translations regularly. Nobody is checking my posts at ASK A TEACHER. I really need your advice. Thank you in advance.

[billmcd]

Submit a few for a start on this thread and I/we will take a look. As a suggestion, keep your posts brief to assure a response.

[happys82]

Thank you very much.

Students,that will represent our country in the Olympiads , are chosen according to the results of National Olympiads organized by T. It consists of two stages.At most six students from each secondary school can participate in the first stage. The first stage examination is twenty five question multiple choice examination held in various centers of provinces in May.Students are asked to write briefly the solution of the questions as well. Accordıng to their solution, papers with high points are re-assessed by jury.
Students,that got 45-50degrees in May examination, can participate in the second stage.The first 20-25 of them are joined camp,where they prepare for the second stage during fifteen days in September, organized by T.

[Raymott]

Nobody is checking my posts at ASK A TEACHER. Only half of my posts have been corrected comprehensively. I really need your advice. Thank you in advance.

This often happens to anyone who posts long texts every day.

[Raymott]

Thank you very much.

Students that will represent our country in the Olympiads [which Olympiads?] are chosen according to the results of the National Olympiads organized by T.
The selection consists of two stages. At most, six students from each secondary school can participate in the first stage. The first stage examination consists of a twenty five question multiple choice examination held in various centers of the provinces in May. Students are asked to write briefly the solution of the questions as well. Accordıng to their solution, Papers given high marks for the solution are re-assessed by a jury.
Students who that get 45-50 degrees [marks?] in the May examination, can participate in the second stage. The first 20-25 of them are joined attend a camp, where they prepare for the second stage during fifteen days in September, organized by T.

Try to use correct spacing around your punctuation.
Don't put commas around a "that" clause.

[happys82]

This often happens to anyone who posts long texts every day.

Yes, you are right. I see it was my mistake. Thank you very much

[happys82]

The second stage of the National Physics Olympiads is held in A. in December.This stage consists of theoretical and experimental section.Theoretical part consists of seven questions,that require a calculus examination, on University level.Students who are successful in the second stage, will be given degrees and medals at a ceremony held by T.
Students who get the first 10-15th place in the second stage will participate in the fifteenth day national team selection in February.The national team is selected according to the results of February camp,

[billmcd]

The second stage of the National Physics Olympiads is held in A. in December.This stage consists of a theoretical and experimental section.The theoretical part consists of seven questions,that require a calculus examination, on the University level.Students who are successful in the second stage, will be given degrees and medals at a ceremony held by T.
Students who get the first 10-15th place in the second stage will participate in the fifteenth day national team selection in February.The national team is selected according to the results of February camp.

[happys82]

In our school preparation for the first stage (May exam) of National Physics Olympiads begins from the ninth grade. Students who selected according to the results of the elimination at the begining of the academic year, prepare for the first stage on weekday and weekends at the additional lessons. Certain units are finished until February. Further, the same issues are studied on a high level,At the end of February the testing examination is taken in the first stage level.
Students who are successful in the first stage get the opportunity to participate in the December examination.


Thanks in advance

[Gillnetter]

In our school, preparation, for the first stage (May exam) of the National Physics Olympiads begins from in the ninth grade. Students who are selected, according to the results of the elimination at the begining of the academic year, prepare for the first stage on weekdays and weekends at the by taking additional lessons. Certain units are finished until February (Unsure of your meaning here). Further, the same issues are studied on a high level. At the end of February the first stage level testing examination is taken in the first stage level.
Students who are successful in the first stage get the opportunity to participate in the December examination.


Thanks in advance

gil