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| It's for someone who want to make an advertisement about an investment project: Our mission consists in planning new ideas, creating new ways, opening new roads, designing the future and making your dreams become true. Thank you in advance |
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| It's generally as good as what I see from native English speakers, but I'd make these changes: "...consists of planning..." "...your dreams come true..." There are no grammatical errors in your statement, just those two non-idiomatic usages. |
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| Thank you |
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