Can any native in English correct it please?

[ieasy]

Hi,

It's for someone who want to make an advertisement about an investment project:

Our mission consists in planning new ideas, creating new ways, opening new roads, designing the future and making your dreams become true.

Thank you in advance

[mykwyner]

It's generally as good as what I see from native English speakers, but I'd make these changes:

"...consists of planning..."

"...your dreams come true..."

There are no grammatical errors in your statement, just those two non-idiomatic usages.

[ieasy]

Thank you