Could I get some comments on my English mock exam?

I'm a sixteen-year-old boy from Norway. Approximately two months ago, we had our English mock exam (an exam to prepare us for the real exam, which we're having tomorrow). I would like some of you to comment on my language, vocabulary and ingenuity. I received the best grade possible on this mock exam, but I didn't really get any comments on it.

The task was:

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Task 3C
Planning a novel OR a film script
You are going to write a novel or a film script where something unexpected or unexplained
happens.
• State the type of novel or film you are going to work on: science fiction, romantic,
detective, factual drama, historical etc.
• Write a half-page summary of your novel or film (remember about paragraphs).
• Write the last page(s) of your novel or film script (not the whole novel/film script!).
• Find a suitable title to attract your reader.

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The file included in this post, contains Task 1 and Task 2 as well, but don't mind them.