Internet

[AR MK]

Why the Internet is good ?

The Internet is good becuase it's a wonderful source of information , and an amzing way of communications and meeting people.

Before the Internet, If I wanted to do a reserch or find something , I had to have my own books , or go to a library and borrow them .

But nowadays , everyone can sit at home and find information in any Serach Engine , such as Google, Yahoo!, etc ..

Before the Internet , You had to write letters , or telephone people . Telephone calls were very expensive. But now just send an e-mail or write an IM on MSN and it will be arrived in seconds.

And also if you have a webcan you can see each other .

But sometimes the Internet is bad becuase the information may not be true , emails , and meeting people may be dangerous .

THE END

Are there any mistakes ? Or ideas to add to my paragraph ?

THANK YOU !

[Joanna violet]

Hi ......
maybe I'm not who can tell you if you done good or not .... but I think you done good ... but there's some letters missed or wrong(amazing/webcam)... I believe you just wrote it quickly ...
that's it .. I just wanted to encourage you because it seems we're in the same level in English ....
Good luck ..