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Old 19-Jun-2009, 02:59
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The below discription is written for Hong Kong Theme Park-Ocean Park, is there any mistake in it?
SkyFairFun is taken to great heights at SkyFair! A big and beautiful helium balloon is ready to take you into the clouds amidst a lively carnival setting! Hilarious clowns, daring acrobats and delightful jugglers are all ready to welcome you as you wait for your flight. The balloon is 22 metres in diameter and soars up to 100 metres into the air. Savor breathtaking views far above the majestic southern side of Hong Kong while soaring 100 meters above the ground – the perfect getaway for couples and families alike!
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Good one, I found no mistake
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