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Old 23-Jun-2009, 10:00
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This is a diacription written for Theme Park Hong Kong-Ocean Park, did i make mistake in it? thanks!
You'll never know what to expect on the Raging River! Every corner is a new adventure! Ocean Park’s Raging River Surfing will give you a chance to challenge yourself. Follow in the footsteps of old-time explorers as you climb into your logboat. Splash your way past calm channels, anticipating the wilderness beyond. Crash down rapids in your boat, navigating through narrow ravines, snaky slopes and chilling hairpin turns! Twist your way towards a spectacular vertical drop – and plunge into the mist below at speeds over 58 km per hour! Courage, confidence and skill, we need all of them , Raging River Surfing, are you ready?
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