“Can I stay home?” He/he tried to ask, but words didn't come out.

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Rover_KE

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“Can I stay home?” He tried to ask, but words didn't come out.

I think the fist letter of the word “He” in the sentence above should be lowercase.

What do you say?
You are right.
 

jutfrank

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You're asking if the whole thing should be one sentence instead of two. I agree that that reads better.
 
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