Please check for errors..

[Rocky_A]

Hi,

Hi I am trying to learn English Grammar..Please check the following sentences for errors:
'Heartiest Congratulations to you all, for winning this event!!! It is the spirit, drive and dedication like yours that have made this event successful. We are looking forward for your participation in all forthcoming FOF events, with even more enthusiasm.'

and in

'
Congratulations!

We really appreciate your participation and winning the event. We look forward your continued participation for forthcoming FOF events.

We would also like to thank all of you for making the event a big Success. J '.

 

[sarat_106]

Hi,

Hi I am trying to learn English Grammar..Please check the following sentences for errors:
'Heartiest Congratulations to you all, for winning this event!!! It is the spirit of dedication and drive like yours that have made this event successful. We are looking forward to (for) your participation in all forthcoming FOF events, with even more enthusiasm ( look forward to is an idiom, meaning: to anticipate something with pleasure)
'

and in

'
Congratulations!

We really appreciate your participation and winning the event. We look forward your continued participation for forthcoming FOF events.

We would also like to thank all of you for making the event a big Success. J'.

Welcome to this forum. Your text has been marginally corrected.

 

[Rocky_A]

Hi,

Thank you for your quick response. Did you check my 2nd paragraph, I find something wrong in it.

'We look forward (*missing like 'to') your continued participation for('in' instead of 'for') forthcoming FOF events.'

Thanks & Regards
Rocky

 

[sarat_106]

Hi,

Thank you for your quick response. Did you check my 2nd paragraph, I find something wrong in it.

'We look forward (*missing like 'to') your continued participation for('in' instead of 'for') forthcoming FOF events.'

Thanks & Regards
Rocky

Yes, I overlooked that. I rewrite as below:
We really appreciate your participating and winning the event. We look forward to your continued participation in the (for) forthcoming FOF events.

 

[Rocky_A]

Hi,

Thank you for your quick response.

Thanks & Regards
Rocky