[Essay] Could you help me (Dyslexia summarizing assignment) please?

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Erez Ovadia

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Hello there,

I would be grateful, if someone could check this piece of writing and make some handy suggestions. Could you recognize if there are some grammatical or spelling mistakes? One more thing, I need to chop it down from 104 words to 100 and I am absolutely clueless where to start from


Dyslexia summarizing assignment


Dyslexics are often gifted or creative people who have an inborn disorder in learning to write, read or spell, Often accompanied by emotional side-effects. For instance Albert Einstein and Leonardo da Vinci, whose unique abilities made them successful in art and science, were suspected to have had dyslexia. However dyslexia’s signs may include difficulty in remembering, pronouncing words clearly, or expressing ideas meaningfully. Moreover failure in tasks on time completion and dysgraphia might occur. Thus dyslexics’ Emotional difficulties include a low self –esteem, frustration and depression, affected by a poorly oral communication or social cues misinterpretation which provides the impression of socially immature figures.


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Erez Ovadia

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umm .. please ?
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If it has to be exactly 100 words, then I suspect it's a homework assignment of some sort. I'm afraid we don't help with those.
 
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