keannu
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In the following, the answer is 1, but can "therefore" make sense? I think maybe instead is more proper but "therefore" also make some sense.
Also, there're two concerns, I think concern with = "related to", concern about = "worry about", so do the two concerns all mean worry even if the former is followed by for? Why didn't it say concerns about fun? Or does it mean interest about fun?
ex)...As a member of the Teen Council, I had to speak to the Community Council to support building an ice skating rink in our community.
The audience was made up of many parents and some young people, most of whom I knew. I did not focus on my friends' concerns for fun. ____A__, I talked to the people who would make the decisions- the parents. To address their concerns about safety, I discussed the security that comes from knowing where a child is, the presence of a professional rink staff, and the careful selection of rules for using the rink safely. ___B______, I explained that the price of admission will be relatively low, as will the rental and maintenance fees. The result exceeded my expectation. Everybody agreed.
)A: instead B: In addition
2)A: Therefore B: In addition
Also, there're two concerns, I think concern with = "related to", concern about = "worry about", so do the two concerns all mean worry even if the former is followed by for? Why didn't it say concerns about fun? Or does it mean interest about fun?
ex)...As a member of the Teen Council, I had to speak to the Community Council to support building an ice skating rink in our community.
The audience was made up of many parents and some young people, most of whom I knew. I did not focus on my friends' concerns for fun. ____A__, I talked to the people who would make the decisions- the parents. To address their concerns about safety, I discussed the security that comes from knowing where a child is, the presence of a professional rink staff, and the careful selection of rules for using the rink safely. ___B______, I explained that the price of admission will be relatively low, as will the rental and maintenance fees. The result exceeded my expectation. Everybody agreed.
)A: instead B: In addition
2)A: Therefore B: In addition
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