use of gerund after comma

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Dear teachers,

Are these grammatically correct?

Education leads people to a brighter future, allowing them to change other people's lives.
Too much money can lead one to ruin, revealing the true self behind them.


Very much appreciated

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The first is fine, but the second doesn't work.

Incidentally, those -ing forms are functioning as participles, not gerunds.
 
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