mrmvp
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I rewrote paragraph number one and are paragraph one and two grammatical? The changes I made are in bold.
1-The Samba Boys did not get their nickname by accident and they appeared to be in fine spirits as they made their way onto the team bus for the game in Qatar.
2-The Samba Boys did not get their nickname by accident, appeared to be in fine spirits as they made their way onto the team bus for the game in Qatar.
3-The Samba Boys did not get their nickname by accident appearing to be in fine spirits as they made their way onto the team bus for the game in Qatar.
The paragraph first paragraph is taken from the following article.
To all teachers and members, thank you for helping and correcting my mistakes in all threads.
1-The Samba Boys did not get their nickname by accident and they appeared to be in fine spirits as they made their way onto the team bus for the game in Qatar.
2-The Samba Boys did not get their nickname by accident, appeared to be in fine spirits as they made their way onto the team bus for the game in Qatar.
3-The Samba Boys did not get their nickname by accident appearing to be in fine spirits as they made their way onto the team bus for the game in Qatar.
The paragraph first paragraph is taken from the following article.
Brazil squad 'laughing' and 'couldn't care less' about Keane views
The Brazil squad have brushed off criticism from Roy Keane over their dancing and celebrations.
www.express.co.uk
To all teachers and members, thank you for helping and correcting my mistakes in all threads.