[Essay] dear teacher

[iamtrieu20]

Im writing to ask teacher about my writing. In my head, writing such as a hell of my shoulder.. in the past, i was very bad but now is penny better. Im always thinking about "what will i use in here and how to make a essay better" i wish teacher could able to help me how to understand essay, what will it use for, the basic of rule of essay will have.

student's leanrner

 

[Rover_KE]

I'm writing to Ask a Teacher about my writing.

First you need to amend your profile. There's no way you can describe yourself as 'Academic'.

Secondly, before you consider essay-writing you need to learn to write simple sentences, using correct capitalisation and punctuation.

You can do this by enrolling on a course in your locality or employing a private teacher. We cannot do it for you here, though we can give you some essential basic guidelines:

- Start every sentence with a capital letter.
- Capitalise the word "I" (first person pronoun).
- End every sentence with the appropriate punctuation mark (full stop, question mark, exclamation mark).
- Put a space after a comma.
- Do not put a space before a full stop.
(Emsr2d2)​

 

[iamtrieu20]

thanks, i will listen to you. I wish i could do it as well, everyday, I writes essay, after that, i looks back my essay and i says whats the hell goin' on ..
in your guidelines, i think i will try to do it and make essay-writing as well..
thank teacher

 

[euncu]

***Not a teacher nor a native-speaker***

I made some corrections to your writing, I hope you'll not mind.

Hello iamtrieu20,

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in your guidelines, [STRIKE]i[/STRIKE] I think [STRIKE]i[/STRIKE] I will try to do it and make essay-writing as well..
thank teacher

 

[Chicken Sandwich]

iamtrieu20, please note that standard capitalization and punctuation are not optional in this forum. You need to check your post before you submit it.

 

[iamtrieu20]

thanks, i will listen )

 

[emsr2d2]

thanks, i will listen )

Saying that you will listen and then posting another thread with no capital letters and incorrect punctuation will make us think that you are definitely not listening. Please post another thank you message using correct capitalisation etc, following the rules you were given in post #2.

 

[iamtrieu20]

Thanks.